Group 3 : We liked the way the chains almost seemed to turn into people or animals and fought with each other. The way that the chains seemed to link together and chain shapes and mold together was cool. Two things that could be changed is just being a little more careful to keep your hands out of the shot and make it even more obvious what the chains are supposed to be. The choice of color was very clever, because it makes the different chains very obvious, and the way the chains moved was very smooth.
Unusual choice of materials! They are very expressive, as the group above noted and the colors stand out. You might bring out the idea of a battle between the chains, or perhaps bring out the idea of abstraction, by playing with adding geometric figures and composing within the frame. There is room for improvement in framing and exposure (the black background is tricking your light meter).
Group 3 : We liked the way the chains almost seemed to turn into people or animals and fought with each other. The way that the chains seemed to link together and chain shapes and mold together was cool. Two things that could be changed is just being a little more careful to keep your hands out of the shot and make it even more obvious what the chains are supposed to be. The choice of color was very clever, because it makes the different chains very obvious, and the way the chains moved was very smooth.
ReplyDeleteUnusual choice of materials! They are very expressive, as the group above noted and the colors stand out. You might bring out the idea of a battle between the chains, or perhaps bring out the idea of abstraction, by playing with adding geometric figures and composing within the frame. There is room for improvement in framing and exposure (the black background is tricking your light meter).
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