Very cool! The fact that you have 4 (I think) separate scenes is great, you are already thinking like a film maker. The first scene with the reflected clouds is very beautiful and unexpected, it is my favorite part. I also love the text, it is very effective, and sort of mysterious. I think the beginning is stronger than the ending, so that leaves you with some room for improvement. Overall I think it is a very impressive first movie.
Isabella,
ReplyDeleteVery cool! The fact that you have 4 (I think) separate scenes is great, you are already thinking like a film maker. The first scene with the reflected clouds is very beautiful and unexpected, it is my favorite part. I also love the text, it is very effective, and sort of mysterious. I think the beginning is stronger than the ending, so that leaves you with some room for improvement. Overall I think it is a very impressive first movie.