Group 3: I like how the paper transformed into the apple. The concept of how "one man's trash is another man's treasure" was pretty cool, and it was cool the way you showed it. Two suggestions are to make it more obvious what the object is, meaning the apple, and film it in a place where there aren't other people in the shot because sometimes they would just disappear and it was distracting. We all liked the placement of your camera in perspective of the trash can, the way it was not in the center of the shot. We also liked the way she rubbed the apple on her shirt and the way it seemed to unwrap itself.
I also thought the best moment was the way she rubbed the apple on her shirt... such a classic gesture. I love the idea of a paper apple, although it was a little unclear in the video when it was paper and when it was an apple. Maybe more of a closeup when she is eating the apple/paper? Maybe another object or colored paper... to make it more obvious that it is or isn't a real object?
Group 3: I like how the paper transformed into the apple. The concept of how "one man's trash is another man's treasure" was pretty cool, and it was cool the way you showed it. Two suggestions are to make it more obvious what the object is, meaning the apple, and film it in a place where there aren't other people in the shot because sometimes they would just disappear and it was distracting. We all liked the placement of your camera in perspective of the trash can, the way it was not in the center of the shot. We also liked the way she rubbed the apple on her shirt and the way it seemed to unwrap itself.
ReplyDeleteI also thought the best moment was the way she rubbed the apple on her shirt... such a classic gesture. I love the idea of a paper apple, although it was a little unclear in the video when it was paper and when it was an apple. Maybe more of a closeup when she is eating the apple/paper? Maybe another object or colored paper... to make it more obvious that it is or isn't a real object?
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